Edge of Reality - PART 01

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The place where the world stopped was not so strange, but the vertigo was overwhelming. The girl could not decide whether or not it would be wise to jump.

"It is boring here, anyway." The boy teased her.

"Would you do it?" The girl's gaze was fixed on the portal at her feet - vertigo slowly subsiding.

"I have no interest in mortals," the boy gestured dramatically.

"Let me guess. They bore you?"

"Precisely."

The place where the world stopped was expansive, alien, and overwhelming - fitting since it birthed reality. The place called the girl often, vertigo be damned. She was, however, more interested in its perilous edges than its vast nexus. Such was the nature of the curious and precocious.

"You should have been born a mortal." The boy floated over to stand beside the girl. "I do not understand what you see in these mists."

Freedom. The girl thought but did not say. Such words were blasphemy, and the All Knowing One always listened. "'Behind shimmering mists, our purpose is known. Behind our hearts, the truth is torn.' Do you not find that interesting?"

"I have found." The boy turned to face her. "That you quote father's scriptures whenever you are at a loss for words."

Not this time. The passage she quoted was the reason the shimmering mists intrigued her so. Mortals dwelled behind those shimmering mists. Were mortals the purpose she was yearning for? Why were they in a realm of their own? If the place where the world stopped was their beginning as well, why were they not privy to it?

The boy grabbed her hand. "Have you forgotten what happens to anyone foolish enough to jump?"

The girl found she had moved a step towards the vast expanse of infinity. "I have not." In truth, they did not know what happened - only that they did not return. "My proclivities do not allow me to forget anything."

The boy sighed. "I was... jesting before. Mortals do not bore me. They... frighten me."

The girl raised an eyebrow. "Truly?" The boy nodded and the girl clasped his hands. "Come with me then!" She said with glee.

"Madness!" He tore her grasp free.

"There is no need to be frightened -"

"And how do you know that?" The boy's tone was sharp, judging. "You really have taken leave of your senses..."

"I suppose I have." The girl said, mad at herself for even asking. "But better a fool," she looked the boy in the eyes. "than a coward."

The boy shook his head, shrugged his shoulders, and disappeared.

The girl was left contemplating on the edge of the place where the world stopped. She should have not chided the boy; now she had to apologize. What prompted her to such anger?

A futile existance. the girl thought.

Disappointed in herself, she stepped back from the edge.

Part 2 of this story by the amazing @penderis.

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This is part 1 of an incomplete story set for Dreem-WOTW S2-R3. I will link Part 2 as soon as it's published.

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Just now reading this... 20 days late 😂

I really like the tone you set here. You left it open ended for who these two are, where they are. The imagery is lovely! I'm off to go read where Penderis took it, congrats on the placement and thanks for the read! 😁

Awww, that was so sweet. Thank you. 🤗 I also appreciate that you like the conclusion me and my partner came up with. This story def has the potential to be something great.

Have a wonderful day. 😘

Nice work, I guess the world is my oyster from here; it will be tough to follow-up, but no matter what the next prompt is I think this can go anywhere. !PIZZA

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i am breathless with anticipation hehehehe I love the way you do the interplay between your characters. It's very fulfilling to me to watch unfold hehe

you and pen will have something special together! i can't wait!!! it's actually interesting... you have similar styles! I never noticed it before - but now that i'm waiting for his conclusion... i was almost reading with expectation of how he would fulfill!!!

excited!!!!!!!!!!!

hahha thank youuu 😁 I think we’ll hit it out of the park (I hope) 😅

This is a very beautiful set-up, I think penderis will have some work to do to conclude this properly. Very special indeed.

This line though

The girl found she had moved a step towards the vast expanse of infinity.

Just beautiful.

Awww, thank you- You’re too kind.

a lovely open part one.
without many specifics we are taken to a strange world and made to consider our own viewpoints without being lectured to.

nice work

Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed it. 😁

THIS is amazing, Јоцко!!! Every single word... had me hooked! Immortal siblings, apprehensive about the veil of mortality and the realm it inhabits. Guided by the scripture of a father they respect. Interesting that they perceive the juncture of the immortal and mortal worlds as the gateway to infinity. She didn't jump? I'm thinking she is gonna have second thoughts on that one! 😂 I can't wait to read @penderis ' conclusion. !PIZZA !ALIVE !LUV

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Awwww Saammmm, thank youu. Im glad you liked it. ☺️🤗❤️

I didn't just like it. I loved it!!! 💗

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I have a feeling that those who come into our realm end up in big trouble... she probably shouldn't jump!

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True! But can they eat it?

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😬 Good point…

Wooow!! I think I need to read part 2... I'm curious about what's happened to the boy and that girl. 😅 Nicely done. 🥳

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