That Spawn, Jealousy

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It's been a while since I tried my hand at writing poetry. And the concept of jealousy is something that has for a while bothered me. So what better way to rid yourself of emotions you don't like than pouring your heart in a paper and setting your spirit for a flight. Oh my God, this sounds like a poem to my ears.😭 A classic depiction of the fact that when I get carried away, best believe I get Carried Away. Anyways, I hope you all enjoy this poem. Coming up with rhyming words was fun and I hope I didn't do too bad at it.

Here goes,



Jealousy, like a monster with sharp teeth,
That turns the sanest of fellows into unruly beasts.
It starts from the mind and digs deep into the soul,
Leaving in its wake a dark, empty hole.

Just a little spark before it ignites into a fire,
Turning friends into foes and the people we admire.
I’ve never seen something so small, grow so vast,
Ripping us from the ones we love and good people from our past.

We covet what people own and are never satisfied with the gifts our hands have shown.
The resentment and discontent we feel in our hearts,
Will slowly, but surely drive us apart.

But the truth about jealousy forever remains,
That it’s a thief of joy and blessings and gains.
And that if we only purge our hearts to become new,
We would be astonished at a whole new point of view.

That the success of others should become ours,
And lifting others should make our smiles as bright as stars.
Not forgetting to count our blessings one by one,
We would be amazed at what God has done.

Let us, therefore, devote our day,
To keep the evil spawn, jealousy, at bay.
Then, trust, as our spirits become light,
And deep down we will feel just right.



Hope you guys had fun reading, do leave a comment below on your thoughts.❤️


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Just as you have said, this disease speeds like a wildfire and pollutes ones mind! Sometimes the host allows itto dwell for so long and its deadly teeth gnawing over everything, changing their perspective into something shallow and evil. The best time time to get rid of this virus is at its first reveal! Your post is so insightful! Bravo!

Thank you so much. It's necessary to curb it while it's still early. I'm glad you appreciate it and thank you for leaving this most insightful comment.🌺💕

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Beautiful poem.
The message conveyed is very deep, in truth human feelings led astray cause relationships with others to end badly.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by.,🌺

You did amazingly well with this. I love the rhymes too.

Thank you so much dear. I appreciate it.🌺

You are welcome.

Beautiful reminder of how jealousy can destroy something beautiful in any relationship.

And that is the word! Thanks for stopping by and leaving this thoughtful comment.

You're a poet
and you didn't even knowet!

That is awesome, but jealousy is nae gid tae man nor beast Tess!

more feed us more!

Flatter me no more Tengo dear, I'm nearly swooning with this praise.🤗 I had to thoroughly peruse the dictionary for rhymes that could match and it was no small feat I tell you. So, I'm happy you appreciate it.

but jealousy is nae gid tae man nor beast.

I would, however, love to hear these words from you. I have an idea of how it sounds but I doubt I'm right.

Truth spoken so well through your brilliant poem! It's great that the thought of the emotion purred you to let it out through this creative writing :)

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Oh I'm happy you loved it dearest @ifarmgirl. Means a whole lot, I assure you. Maybe you could give me your feeback on the next one?

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Seen my poem for the analysis...
You'll see my thoughts there ✨🖤

Wow! I'm incredibly honoured. I can't wait dear.💕🤗

Yay! 🤗
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Truly jealously is a bad habit, it does have a negative vibration, most people deny they are jealous but deep down they know they are, and it sure does take blessings away.
Well written poem, rhyming are good.

It starts from the mind...

That line is not to be taken lightly and it says a lot about the existential warfare that goes in within our mind.

Jealous in it's extreme form is not something you would want to experience. It's just not worth it because at that point, the same heart that was once filled with love and admiration will become filled with hate and contempt.

Do you also know that there is a cute kinda jealousy? Haha. I know it's not the theme of the poem, but I can't help mentioning that. Every couple needs that sorta jealousy to spark the Romantic side of their relationship

It sounds like someone has thoroughly experienced this emotion because I couldn't have explained it better. I'm happy you could relate to the poem.

And yeah, I realize the cute jealousy. It strengthens the bonds of the relationship and I guess adds to the spice and sizzle...? I don't know, you would know best.😅